Monday, August 16, 2010

My Story Introduction

It was dark and misty in the basement, the stairs were creaking and the only light was coming from the lightning bolts and from the flicker of the broken street lamps. The smell of dust and dead rats filled the room. Suddenly Bayleigh felt her stomache doing flips, she was sure she saw something move!

1 comment:

  1. This is a very descriptive piece of written language. You have been able to create a picture in my mind because of the words you have chosen. I can also use my sensors to smell and hear the the different things in the basement!!